Age/Gender: 80, Male
Location: At home, getting paler.
Job: Student
You've passed me on the street, you've met my eye on the train. You watched me drop a coin as I fumbled for my phone, but didn't think it was worth speaking up about - after all, it was only 10 cents. You didn't care then, so why do you care now?
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Flash Reviews: 80
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"One of the best things I've seen done with flash"
Not only was the animation and art fantastic, but the audio was used really nicely, and the scenario was funny, and still quite skillful.
And the hint that you are capable of making serious flashes as well...
*Goes and watches all of Dei-sama's flash*
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It was pretty good, especially when compared to a lot of the stuff that gets made most of the time.
If I had to say one thing bad about it, it would be that there are two endings, but it's painfully obvious how to get each one. It should either be a choose-your-way thing, or it should be linear. I made the same mistake a while ago, trying to "inject" independence into a game. You have to plan for the different endings, and have the choices throughout the game branch off and finally conclude in them.
But yeah, the storyline was pretty good, and the pics were nice. :P
Very nice work indeed. ;D
Author's Response:
Yeah you're right. Next time I'll put on more choices. Each leading to 3 different endings.
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ur animatin suks lol
(Just helping you out with your PS3 xD)
Seriously though, the animation wasn't that bad, the voice acting was pretty good and I loved the script and storyline.
I'd give it an A+ xD
Great work!
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